Comments – Abraham Rudnick
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Below find my input on 2 of the 4 suggested themes (I will not comment on cell lines and on stem cells as they are not part of my expertise):
Theme 1 (multijurisdictional research): Overall this theme seems well written and sound to me. I suggest that in subsection 3.4’s 3rd paragraph, three weeks be changed to one month, for simplicity and feasibility.
Theme 2 (broad consent): Overall this theme seems well written and sound to me. I suggest that in section 3’s second paragraph’s last sentence, the word in be deleted (between the word during and the word the).
Dr. Abraham (Rami) Rudnick, BMedSc, MD, MPsych, PhD (Phil), CPRP, FRCPC, CCPE, DFESPCH, FCPA, CPRRP, MCIL
Professor, Department of Psychiatry and School of Occupational Therapy, Dalhousie University
Clinical Director, Nova Scotia Operational Stress Injury Clinic
210-100 Eileen Stubbs Avenue
Dartmouth, Nova Scotia B3B1Y6, Canada
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